I never had a key for these things..

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-23 10:16 PM

Everytime I feel
the songs
written on paper
that isn't my own..

they crumble in my hair.

you spoke in lyric
and every word
seemed
beautiful.

You wrote me letters
signed your name
in sequence to the
stars I
wished upon..

They were never sent..

I never liked
the way you sang,
drawled out the words
and
sometimes I
misunderstood the message..

So be silent as
I count my tears..
each one
named after
all the parts of you
that I

never could love..

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-08-23 10:24 PM

So be silent as
I count my tears..
each one
named after
all the parts of you
that I

never could love..

A very cool write, I love this stanza

Jason

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-08-23 11:01 PM

you spoke in lyric
and every word
seemed
beautiful.

"seemed", yes thats the key word in this .....it seems , but it isnt sometimes, sadly to say.....
wow, to you too, little sister

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

3 posted 2003-08-23 11:08 PM

and everything old is new again... so nice this cycle of life... so not nice to see the young suffer the same pain -- but it is as human as eating and sleeping

not every lie isn't the truth

you'll understand that some day

but now understand that you are the heart of a poet

thanks meg

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-08-23 11:21 PM

"So be silent as
I count my tears..
each one
named after
all the parts of you
that I

never could love.."

WOW ... it never occured to me before to "name" each tear shed ... brilliant idea.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-24 11:32 PM

Awesome meg as usual

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

6 posted 2003-08-25 03:58 PM

Aye meg, the things that are left behind...
Passions makes a pretty good dumpster
though and you write it well.

dale

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

7 posted 2003-08-25 04:27 PM

clever
arthur

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

8 posted 2003-08-25 04:29 PM

"So be silent as
I count my tears..
each one
named after
all the parts of you
that I

never could love.."

Breath taking, in a style that is all your own my sweet poetic friend!

Very, very much enjoyed!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-08-25 07:21 PM

nice read

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