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Open Poetry #28

Pygmalion Man

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-08-23 02:35 PM

Making your heart whole

entertaining the masks of you,
a Pygmalion man tasting
delicious nectar, sipping from
the white wine of the night

desire your brandy

A Pygmalion man is my own metaphor for the King of Cyprus who made a female figure out of ivory that is brought to life for him by Aphrodite. This is a man whose desire is great for the woman of his fantasy.

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (08-23-2003 03:17 PM).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-08-23 03:03 PM

This is definitely worthy of thought, and I must say that I enjoy your style, my friend. What I see is in the last line...some people desire brandy, yet to some people, desire is brandy....to be sipped slowly, and made to last. ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-08-23 05:36 PM

IvyRose~
Your poetic versatility is outstanding~

I thoroughly enjoyed this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-08-23 10:12 PM

This is a man whose desire is great for the woman of his fantasy.

Shoot, that's all of us!

But this male Pyg likes this poem very much....

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