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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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0 posted 2003-08-22 10:27 PM

she has a permanent place in
the valley of my heart always

my pulse throbs with thrusting
vibrations when my eyes focus
on her graceful physique as she
enters into my dimension

thoughts of her succumb me into
daydreams of ecstasy, vibrations
of her voice softly play a melody
into my ears

she has my senses in a dazzle
and my thoughts frazzled beyond
a fool's paradise every time she's
near. have you been there ~ ?

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Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2003-08-22 10:40 PM

HMMM.

Has someone been smitten by a cuddly kitten?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-08-22 10:44 PM

Sounds as though you've been bitten by the love bug Glenn!

~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2003-08-22 10:59 PM

reminds me of my one friend who wrote a poem "frazzled" awhile ago here or something to that nature...miss them dearly *sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

4 posted 2003-08-23 10:05 PM

I've been to similar places.
Not sure about the fool's paradise,
though!

Frazzled OFTEN, however!

Clever and delightful write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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