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kaleanna
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0 posted 2003-08-23 10:28 AM



Tears into a Pillow

Late at nite, when not a sound
can be heard
the tears start to fall

the soft sobs muffled
the tears fall into a pillow

no one to see, no one to hear
the soft cries nor the tears

crying to sleep,
the disappointments of the day
washed away

in the darkness of the nite
and the tears that fall
softly onto a pillow

and when the sun rises
and the morning starts

No one knows of the tears
that fall onto a pillow
in the darkness of the night

(written aug 18th, 2003)
Meesh

© Copyright 2003 M. Robin - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-08-23 10:44 AM


I know all about tears...more than I ever wished to have.

nice writing
M

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-08-23 10:49 AM


Heart-breaking to read.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-08-23 01:17 PM


I haven't read your other posts yet, Meesh. This one is sad, but expresses well an emotional moment many of us understand and have experienced.

Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2003-08-23 02:44 PM


I know this one all too well..too often...almost every single night....I'd like to think it all gets better...eventually..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Janette
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5 posted 2003-08-23 07:22 PM


Please know I could feel the pain in this nicely written piece.

And please let me welcome you to Passions!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-08-23 08:58 PM


kaleanna - I know of them. Hope things are well with you...

BC

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