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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2003-08-04 12:23 PM



I sit here feeling used, emotionally abused
Sometimes I feel like all I'm good for is my money
I try to help people and get ridiculed in return
At times I hurt so bad, I feel like I burn
I don't think people have realized what has happened to me, I'm dying inside you see
I tried so hard, for what?for nothing
I haave received nothing in return

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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-08-04 12:32 PM


:'(  There are people out there that love just to feel the love come back. Keep trying.
Sending

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

scuffedshoe2
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2 posted 2003-08-04 12:32 PM


This is a great poem! Everyone feels like this at leaste once in their lives. People suck!

-Ian

ParisGrl
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3 posted 2003-08-04 12:38 PM


Shara,

I will keep trying.  Thanks, for your reply.

Ian,

Not all people suck.  One just has to watch out for the sucky ones.  lol  Thanks for reading, i'm glad you enjoyed it.

Take Care,
~Laura~

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Beneath the northern stars
4 posted 2003-08-04 01:37 PM


Yeah people can suck at times for sure. I know that not everyone does. I hope you meet up with some cool people soon, Laura.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2003-08-04 01:51 PM


ParisGrl
Expect nothing in return and you will be happy. Enjoyed the read.

Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
6 posted 2003-08-04 02:05 PM


The only reward for having done good is having done it.

That others would abuse it is to their own detriment.

Keep writing and growing Laura

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