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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-08-03 10:49 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

I am often left in awe
At the miracle of birth
Or when the first Spring flowers
Start to break through the earth

I am entranced by the morning
In the early hours of dawn
When the birds are so active
As they feed on the lawn

I am fascinated by the ocean
And the incoming tide
As the warm winds embrace me
I let the sun be my guide

I am seduced by the sunset
Where lovers come to be
As they tenderly kiss each other
The sun sets below the sea

I am amazed by the moon
As it casts it's white light
In the quiet of the evening
Such a beautiful sight

I am captivated by your being
My love for you has no end
Not only are you my lover
But you're my very best friend

* * *

"To the world you are someone,
but to someone you are the world"



I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (08-04-2003 06:07 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-08-03 10:57 PM


This is beautiful, and I can see someone else likes the days of old...The dress like Maid Marion, and the Robin Hood dress of the man. I love tales of old, and the beautiful dress back then. So this was a treat in word, and graphics, too. Loved this!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-04 12:09 PM


I am captivated by your being
My love for you has no end
Not only are you my lover
But you're my very best friend



Sue, this is so beautiful........and exactly
how my Love and I  feel about each other.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Skyfire
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3 posted 2003-08-04 01:08 AM


*sigh* I wish I could feel this way again. Beautiful write

It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in

scuffedshoe2
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since 2003-08-04
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4 posted 2003-08-04 01:11 AM


beautiful, you should consider writng childrens storys. There is somethihng very motherly about your style.

-ian

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-04 04:18 AM


Yes, love can carry on...James
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-08-04 05:07 AM


always amazed at how you do these
Trillium
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7 posted 2003-08-04 05:46 PM


Sue:  This is a nice tribute to the wonderful world we live in and the love that you feel!

Betty Lou Hebert

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-08-04 06:28 PM


Suetang - you are so, well so, well, just so expressive in your romantic words. Just lovely...

B

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