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Open Poetry #28
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symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03
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Somewhere
0 posted 2003-08-18 05:55 PM

Black star shadowed by a white, luminous background
Stay on this Earth to entice
Stay on this Earth to depress
Stay on this Earth to mystifie the unknown for ever
And ever and ever because you are the unknown
The unknown that wants to be known
Questions only answered through death
Let your presence give a guiding light to morals
Let answers drip through your presence
So hope will flourish for generations
Religious hope for the world forever last
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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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1 posted 2003-08-18 08:18 PM

symphony . . .

these lines are perfect:

The unknown that wants to be known
Questions only answered through death

nice job
xxoo
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-08-18 10:58 PM

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart
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