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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-19 09:38 PM



Listening A-mused

she awakens you
from silence
in the lightening whirl
surrounding you
beckoning your speech
as thunder
in the distance
smell of horizon
she speaks
listen
stimulated to respond
wake up
to rainy
edges today

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Wind
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1 posted 2003-07-19 09:40 PM


yeah, it's just like that, isn't it. Thanks lady
Local Rebel
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2 posted 2003-07-19 11:08 PM


Carpe
diem

quam
minimum
credula postero

Seize the day, put little trust in the future.



angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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3 posted 2003-07-19 11:15 PM


You've nailed it down.Nicely done.
angelblueyes

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