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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-19 05:17 AM



Thy vermilion queen has seen thy devotion,
Battles you have fought and won for me,
Thy heart filled with unending emotion,

Through rain, through dark forests, you trod,
Protecting, loving, serving thy queen,
Who rules with loves golden rod,

What bravery has thalt shone to thy queen,
Such brilliance, overflowing committment,
For throughout the land, you, best there has ever been,

Bow down before me, on bendend knee,
I queen vermilion, bestow upon thee the highest honor ever awarded,
Head knight you shall be,let the history scrolls have this recorded,

Of all the pain, the suffering, of courage,
With the sword of truth, I knight thee,
Now you are place in royal heritage,

Now with great honour and pride,
Go and serve thy queen, thy lady,
Be devoted, forever true, thy knight,
of perfect chivalry.


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-19-2003 05:37 AM).]

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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2003-07-19 05:22 AM


My Queen this could have come from Guinivere herself...it speaks of bold love and devotion...such is what i have for you..thank you my Vermilion Queen....

love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-07-19 05:44 AM


Thank you my sweetest,your words humble me,
for every word is appreciated and honored!

xxxx love A Romantic Heart

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-07-19 08:25 AM


I enjoy your writing Romantic Heart...James
Ericc
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4 posted 2003-07-19 03:25 PM


Beautiful.
Eric

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-07-19 11:14 PM


Thank you James and Eric for your time and for your replies, I greatly appreciate them!

~ARH

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