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Poor Neglected Balladeer
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Poor Neglected Balladeer |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Balladeer was wondering, Why the gals all turned their heads He never got attention Only sneers instead. He used all of the after shaves, He'd read about and seen, But it didn't turn the ladies on, They all just acted mean. He wore the latest scents, But no girls would look his way, The scent he wore was rightly named, Gulf Catch of the Day. The only folks that looked his way, Or even seemed to flirt, Were Local Rebel and LongJohn, When he wore his mini-skirt. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You've got to love the ornery ones... they keep us spinning!  |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
OH..........You are so bad. Hahahaha. Aw.....Check out those sexy legs. LOL Bon-Bon |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ohhh! You're sooooo naughty!--and that's a gooood thang!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
very interesting poem...I both laughed, understood, and appreciated your way with words... Mike |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
When Toe is teasing Balladeer A smile gets to my face And I just grin at written words Penned down in sweet embrace Go get'm Toe!!! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I can always count on you for a hearty laugh. You never disappoint. Patricia |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My god, is it Groundhog Day again already where animals come out of the ground?? That's what I like about you, Toe, you ain't got enough sense to quit...  (and I haven't worn a mini-skirt in years!!)  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Too funny... believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL at you and Balladeer, too. I wonder what Reb hawke and LongJohn are going to say?? Ya'll are so crazy.   Hugs  Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Toerag - I believe it's in the mustache, yes that's it, the mustachio... BC |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Too Too Funny Toe! Ya'll just keep um' coming...I live for this stuff!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
alrighty then...I'll just step on back outta the way here  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Course I looked How could I not? It's like a train wreck You ornery sot I heard intel that may be poor (not unlike Conndie Rice's) deer's gams are posted behind closed doors  hehehheheh |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL @ this and at 'Deer's and LR's replies. You guys make me smile. Hugs,  ~Vicky "it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease to exist than to exist forever and never be a part of beauty" -- Don Marquis [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-21-2003 05:11 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
HaHaHaHa!! @ Deer's and Reb replies. I knew they would get you, Toe. You'd better be careful. |
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