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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-07-15 07:03 AM


Beauty whispers like sounds of warm magic in the night
Meek passive spring fuels a heart beating with aesthetic might
Rising with each new face of dawn
Wrapped in a star of love cerebral and known
Empty silent sounds fading with a cool evening breeze
Beauteous images catch me like April’s buds as you surround me
Capturing my breath, my soul, my heart,
Drifting thoughts on mid-summer’s eve, evolving
As our mind creates our own expressions
Perhaps we emerged with the nature of love
Something babbling erasing egos…we are
As children meeting each new experience
Gaining great capacity with eager wonderment
And our road is a ribbon of moonlight
Wrapping each present…each voice of love
Holding accountable, embracing the ultimate relationship
Expressively resurrected unifying a world of voice
Enchanting shall never pass from earth, inspired by couplet
What becomes you…embodies deep resonance
From us both…composing inner life
The sound of sense is a lyrical intensely silently narrative
We are fragments in a kaleidoscope of newly patterned dreams
Dwelling in the possibility of dense rooted trees
Overlapping a clarity of never before heard, musical intensity
Painting rivers of fertility, creating our gentle meters
There is nothing between this space unknown
Living more of our lives with then without…..

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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
1 posted 2003-07-15 08:16 AM


We are fragments in a kaleidoscope of newly patterned dreams
Dwelling in the possibility of dense rooted trees

Lee J, I have been reading you, and you have such wisdom in words, you sometimes have me speechless, so just know that I am reading. This was just beautiful. Got me thinking.



Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-07-15 08:23 AM


LeeJ
Wonderful write, enjoyed the read very much.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2003-07-15 08:39 AM


beautiful images of love , nature and dreamy harmony , in fact quite uplifting

Hope

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-07-15 08:52 AM


Oh my this is wonderful!
Your writing leaves me speechless..
which is a difficult thing for anyone to do.
Beautiful...beautiful write.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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