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Poet's Dance
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Poet's Dance |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Poet's Dance kick down the walls of consequence watch them topple slowly down on sacred ground as verse of ink spills from the quill to meet the page in happenstance to take a chance on poet's dance survivor's climb in perfect rhyme each syllable a mark of time as moments pass me by... and still I cry ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-13-2003 03:43 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YES. Now THAT'S what I'm talking about!!! gawd I love ya lady! so good, so good, to know that ink of yours is flowing again!!! Makes me so happy? I just wanna stand up and SHAKE!!!!    |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen?...do you see this great big smile on my face? YOU put it there!  Who knew that SHAKING could be so therapeutic? Oh wait...apparently YOU did! LOL THANK YOU! Love ya too, lady!...LOTS!   "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-13-2003 06:44 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
each syllable a mark of time ~*~ Indeed they are. Well said, Miss Vicky... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
watch them topple slowly down on sacred ground as verse of ink spills from the quill to meet the page in happenstance YES!!! this is PERFECT, Lady. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.  Hugs Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic Vicky! I love this!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky Some times there just is magic...like now. So glad to see your muse and you! Love the poem! |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
to take a chance on poet's dance survivor's climb in perfect rhyme each syllable a mark of time as moments pass me by... and still I cry I wish you could have seen my jaw drop and my eyes widen as I read this poem.... Other than "You're my HERO!" I can think of nothing to say.... I am in awe. Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, this is awesome! loved it |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow, Vicky, you're unstoppable now YEAH!!!!... Even though you're gone ... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yes, my friend..tears are good...cry out the poison, until it is mostly gone..then start to pick yourself back up...respect you, for no one will ever respect you as you should be...love you, for no one will ever love you as you should be loved...until YOU do.. dont fear the tears, or the heart ache...it is part of this unfair life that we live in....but the writing is part of your healing....give in to the words.. let them spill as your tears spill...and you will heal my friend.....great job!! enjoyed.. lv,g "If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VickyGal~ Nice little free-verse spill with nicely placed internal rhymes~ You always had the power to release the thoughts ... ya' just work really well off of a challenge or a little inspire~ Love ya' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thank you all SO MUCH for the replies! I love you guys more than you know, and I appreciate each and every word from you! Love and hugs to all, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I think you've gotten it exactly, Vicky. The poet's work is a gift to the world that often comes from tragedy, and doesn't help the poet... it's an act of altruism in many ways. "Still I cry," despite the message, the art and the beauty that comes from the tears... it doesn't change what they are. And I've already told you what I think of the meter. Very daring. Brian Faith is a fine invention |
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