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LukeatNFFC
Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England

0 posted 2003-07-09 05:11 PM



Wow...my third poem in just the three hours ive been a member!

Stay Away-

Stay Away! I hurt,
I grieve.
Stay Away! I hurt,
Please Leave.

Run Away! I hurt,
I cry.
Run Away! I hurt,
I die.

Leave Me! I hurt,
But I live.
Leave Me! I hurt,
But I give.

Stay me these last words,
Forgive me as I forgave you,
Forgive me,
For pity would you love...too?

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-07-09 05:18 PM


Congratulations on your third poem. I hope you stay awhile and grow. I like this painful piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



LukeatNFFC
Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England
2 posted 2003-07-09 05:19 PM


Thank You. I intend to stay a while, if im allowed to...
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