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LukeatNFFC
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0 posted 2003-07-09 03:57 PM


Just something I concocted in these few seconds reading other people's poetry...

Violence-

Hold the silence,
Walk away,
Regret the violence,
Before you pay.

Dont hit out,
Just pace your anger,
Be brave and stout,
Lonely stranger.

Listen to the words of experience,
Stay your hold on the trigger.

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1 posted 2003-07-09 03:58 PM


Great write, poetry inspires poetry.
wild irish
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2 posted 2003-07-09 03:58 PM


If we would listen very very good www.rateapoet.com
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-07-09 04:35 PM


Poets inspiring poets! Great concoction of wise words!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel


LukeatNFFC
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4 posted 2003-07-09 05:03 PM


'Very very Good'

Pardon?

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