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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-06-30 09:59 AM


Walk with me, come through the wardrobe....into Narnia.
Aslan will be there,you will be my winter queen.

To a castle, surrounded by spectral trees and glistening snow i will take you,you are the most beautiful queen there has ever been.

Aslan the lion will watch by the doors of the castle,no wicked white winter witch will disturb our love.

Look...the fire it flickers orange and red flames,let us eat fruit before our love, outside heavy snow is falling from above.

With your raiments of crimson, you look like moving fire.
My hearts desire, come lay by me, love me through the long, cold, snowy night.

Sweeping my hands across your body, white as the carpet outside,i am exstatic throughout my whole essence.
Your beauty, your clear face,your dark eyes so bright.

Laying on silk, we make love, as the flakes fall silently and adds to our dreamscape.
Your cries echo through the castle, but we are safe, Aslan still waits without.

No fell creatures will pass his watchfull eyes,we are free from danger.
Laying in each others arms, with only the full, flickering flames to light us in the castle,my world has turned about..

Let us reside forever in Narnia, never go back through the wardrobe, just you,me and Aslan will live here forever...in this winter world.....!

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-06-30 03:58 PM


This is beautiful my love, I love your sweetness and your vivid imagination....

I will go through the wardrobe with you and never come back, lay by your side and watch the snow fall outside,.....

Love, Your Vermilion Queen

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-01 01:45 AM


May you and your Vermilion Queen reside  happily in Narnia, forevermore...

Eternal Love & Happiness for you both,
EA

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2003-07-01 01:58 PM


I don't think there was anyone in school who was not forced to read that book for a book report...lol

good write there GR

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