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Torn Up (20 or less)
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Torn Up (20 or less) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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It's for your own good they say but I feel torn up anyway |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
How come it's mostly the things that are "bad" for us that feel SOOOO good?!? Wanna glass of wine? Better ripped than torn, I always say...  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Aye, they ALWAYS say that! ...and how many times is it true? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Exactly...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good,, with a few words expressing.. A voice of honesty |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh yes...yup....uh huh. Hugs for this Sandra !! "Said you'd give me light... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write! ...I always wonder if another person's experience makes it easier or harder for them to tell you that its for your own good?  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bullseye! Been there, know it well. Thanx Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exactly!! Love this Sandra! So good to have you back! ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
wow, I really liked that. when poems go on and on, I start to snore, but yours was nice and short. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I use to tell my son that challenging things developed character. One day he declared he had enough character! Peace and courage to you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
They said cod liver oil was good for me too Sandra, and it never made me once feel better so I feel this one all too well. You take emotions and do magical things to them with your words. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like growing pains! Healing hugs, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It tears me up to hear what's best for me! Who is to say what's in yours or my best interest. I know what I want and I want it now! As Larry would say, patience is overrated! Dear Sandra~ It's so good to read you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I never did tend to lean towards what was for my own good!! I loved this, and know you won't feel torn up for long!!!  Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-01-2003 04:29 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
eh. no one is realy worth all that, are they? cute poem tho [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-01-2003 07:10 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Read this yesterday, Cat... came back to say oh so right....  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...sigh |
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