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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-06-29 06:23 PM



My Perfect Universe

As I venture into a parallel universe
I see a world so different
A world where all the nations are united
And the worlds populace living in harmony
No hunger, no famine, no terror, no war
Some would say it was a perfect world
But I had to leave that parallel universe
It was a place where I never met you
And with you in my world makes this
My Perfect Universe

"Who am I? Why am i here?" Admiral James Stockdale

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-29 06:59 PM


This is so sweet. Just
a perfect love poem.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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2 posted 2003-06-29 06:59 PM


without the twists and turns of adversity we'd never get to the good stuff would we?

like peeling an orange -- have to go through the tough sticky stuff to get to the sweet part inside....

welcme back to this universe!

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