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BluesSerenade
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0 posted 2003-06-28 09:40 PM



Cry your tears, baby
and let them fall freely
blow them off into the breeze
take your flight over never ever lands
remember, nothing is forever  
wipe the slate clean
dust yourself off
come see, let it be
cry your tears, baby  
count your friends on one hand
and consider yourself lucky~

*For Larry, just because*


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Larry C
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1 posted 2003-06-28 09:41 PM


No way! Thank you dear girl. You are a true friend. And you have many more. I'll loan my hands to help you count. Bless you and peace...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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2 posted 2003-06-28 09:41 PM


I bet he'll like it, I sure did.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-06-28 09:42 PM


God Bluesy - how sweet of you
The both of you
I loved this . . .
*smiling*
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-06-28 09:44 PM


I can do that -- with enough left over for a gesture!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Larry C
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5 posted 2003-06-28 09:49 PM


LMBO You Rat...Too Dang Funny!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Ratleader
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6 posted 2003-06-28 10:01 PM


It helps keep the numbers down......

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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1slick_lady
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7 posted 2003-06-28 10:04 PM


very sweetttttttttttttttttttt
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-06-28 10:50 PM


remember, nothing is forever  
wipe the slate clean
dust yourself off

if only we can so easily,
words of comfort though, bluesgirl

timothysangel1973
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9 posted 2003-06-28 11:15 PM


Glad to see you back in here.

Great write!

Kaoru
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10 posted 2003-06-28 11:16 PM


Great write
SEA
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11 posted 2003-06-28 11:19 PM


I wasn't sure about the title, but well, it's you, so of course, I read...
"remember, nothing is forever "
definately

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-06-28 11:39 PM


Lori, I'm glad to see you back.
I hope things are better for you.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Martie
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13 posted 2003-06-29 12:14 PM


Lori...Big hugs to you, and Larry too!
Edder
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14 posted 2003-06-29 01:14 AM


"count your friends on one hand
and consider yourself lucky~"
lucky indeed...sweet as ever,lori


Larry C
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15 posted 2003-06-29 05:49 AM


Susan,
What did that mean? LOL

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Mistletoe Angel
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16 posted 2003-06-29 02:27 PM




(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a good friend to every one of us and I know Larry is crying in joy to have a wonderful friend like you as I am too! (sigh) This is angelic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-06-29 03:28 PM


Well, you can blow me over with a feather right about now! I just posted a poem today and it has some of the same sentiments and words as yours does! Mine is "Seize the Day!"

Just goes-ta-show-ya, great minds DO think alike! LOL

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Duncan
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18 posted 2003-06-29 03:44 PM


"count your friends on one hand
and consider yourself lucky~"

How 'bout I lend ya a finger for me????  It would be the most charming, amusing finger!!  


Jason Lyle
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19 posted 2003-06-29 04:18 PM


I'm with Larry, you will need more than just your own hands to count your friends.

Jason

BluesSerenade
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20 posted 2003-06-29 07:03 PM


True friends are hard to come by, and you are a rare gift in that department.  Hugs Larry~

I'm glad you liked, thanks Wind~

Hey tweets~  One good turn deserves another, right?
I'm always happy to see you here, thank you.

Have to love that gesture... smiling at you Ed~

Thanks for the sweet reply Helen~

Michele~  it's not supposed to be easy,
as long as we give it our best shot is all that matters. Hugs, you~

Tima~ thank you for reading and for caring.

Kaoru~     Thanks~

SEA~ The jokes on me, concerning the title!  waaaa, waaaa waaa!!!

Ethel~ Thanks for your concern, and yes I'm all better.
Those pity parties are soooo cheesy.  I will be sure to decline next time.

Martie~  Thanks for the much needed hugs~

Edder~  Thank you for the sweet,  my sweet~

Those angel wings of yours bring such comfort to me.
Thank you always Noah~

Linda~     Nothing like positive reinforcement!  I appreciate you so much.

Hey Duncan~ The green guy is more you. Thanks for taking the time to amuse me....I hope you never change!!

Jason~ You are such a good man!  Thank you for being so kind to me.  It means alot!!!

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