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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-06-28 11:53 AM



Once Upon A Time

He was once upon a time a sensible man-
He dressed in his conservative suits of black,
gray and brown.
Ties made of the finest silk
Shoes to match each suit made of the softest leather.

He was once upon a time a sensible man-
He’d stand and gaze at the men around him
and
look down his aristocratic nose.
He would think how uncouth these men with their
cream colored suits and rich silky blues.
Wearing flamboyant ties of bright red and flashy yellow.
Cream colored shoes; pale blues shoes and black patent leather.
No taste he would say, no taste.

He was once upon a time a sensible man.
He would never hum a silly little tune or whistle in the shower
because it was beautiful day.
Stop and smile at a little child in the park
or
stop and smell a delicate daffodil.

He was once upon a time a sensible man.
He would give the gift of practicality
No nonsense or frivolity.
This sensible man no warmth or love held in his
heart made of stone, only practical sensibility.

He was once upon a time a sensible man.
He sits and gazes into the warm glowing fire
and wonders about his life.
An ache he does feel, but he does not understand this feeling he is feeling.
He closes his eyes and shuts out this empty longing-
This feeling of wishing he had someone to hold
and
someone to envelop with warm caring love.
For he is a practical, sensible man.

Bonnie J. aka Bon-Bon

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-28 12:05 PM


I was about to say this sounds just like my brother...but then I remembered Disney World...I guess for that three days, he was different...we had a blast, he was actually human then
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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2 posted 2003-06-28 01:23 PM


yes some realise too late  that they
should have found themselves a mate

Hope

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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3 posted 2003-06-28 02:18 PM


very good thoughts expressed,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
4 posted 2003-06-29 10:18 AM


Good morning. Thank you for reading my words of poetry.
Bonnie aka Bon-Bon

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