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deimos III
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deimos III |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This was a repetition to power, a visitation of name in eight circles and so accidental. Here there is serpentine describing first beneficial and by parts possessive. Next is sanctuary region of tribulation entered by pain. Last is heat sideways measured by drops. The similarity is primitive and prone to error. The luxury was to count one two three and see. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It's difficult to understand this, mirror man, feels a bit scary to me. Can you explain? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very interesting, are you speaking of the 8 faces of the interlocking rings...which was discovered not only in crop fields but acurately resembles a dohmn in Italy? And all the meanings behind them? |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I'm with Martie on this one Mirror Man, maybe I don't have my thinking cap on tight enough...it's great, and would be even better if I understood it! (well for me anyway) HaHa |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
MM: You did it! Wow! I have to read it some more before I can tell you what I see. but after first read, I enjoy the imagery of the circular motions and their assignments. Cool! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
MM: When I put all the deimos together, I sense that I'm reading about generations of royalty or some kind of hierarchy. And I also get a sense of the falsehood of birthright. But deimos III alone almost sounds like layers of truth and/or realization, awareness. Ok, thanks for twisting my mind once again.... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I think LeeJ is onto something here.... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I liked it  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I too am curious to the inspiration of this. And I'd love to have coffee with you and LeeJ sometime! Enjoyed. And I love this kinda stuff. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Martie -- I don't mean to scare anyone with these. I write a lot of junk, this one I thought was interesting. LeeJ -- I don't really know, but the one before has a circle in it also. timothysangel1973 -- I understand how you feel. Some of this stuff creeps me out too. Kahlil -- I'm glad you get so much out of it. This is fun, I hope. Kaoru -- thank you very much. serenity blaze -- this was inspired by the MIBs. They want my brain. I like coffee. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Heh I was trying to read figure out where the was coming from as well. As the attendant of "Mars", the god of war? As the brother of Phobos? As one of the twin moons of Mars, the planet? or as the Greek word for "fear"? Plus, the circles and layers gave this an arcane slant. Enjoyed Ed [This message has been edited by wranx (06-29-2003 10:19 AM).] |
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