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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-06-26 09:21 AM


Sage tenderly emits a voice singing to the ears of earth
Market place of countenance blowing vigor’s gaily berth
Anchoring magnetic harmony to the listener’s sponging core
Of wind, or’r land & seas, life’s womb tumbling ever forth
Undertones of languid seasons, contain breathless patient years
Fires spreading innate beams, mutual Carnegie premieres
Full circled glowing home, welcomes musical flakes so poignant
Where heaven details many stars, melodious plumes utterly fragrant
Loving waves, cloistered nostalgic, ripens refuge in this nest
Eye of soul, world of ecstasy, spurts golden ingots at it’s best
To fill and refill goblet’s brainchild, cavalcades our springtime verse
We gulp, as if our heart’s could think, sweet flocks and whirling herds
Therefore, deep within each and every gracious human soul
Swarm feats of life, seeding wisdom’s secret goals
Because we are the doers of our own eternal dreams
By all men’s faith in human art and doubtless liberty

By Lee J. 05/19/03

By Lee J.



© 2003 Lee J. (All rights reserved)




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1 posted 2003-06-26 09:51 AM


"Undertones of languid seasons, contain breathless patient years"

your poetry is so rich....


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2 posted 2003-06-26 01:41 PM


interesting write
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3 posted 2003-06-26 05:14 PM


As I read this, I pictured the quenching of a thirsty world.  Enjoyed the word play, and can't pick a single line I liked more than another. A great write. TD
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