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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-05-04 04:01 PM



Photo by Tony Howell


One, in midst of an immense field
of flowers gazing into the sky,
the eyes of my heart in search of You.
Upon the warm touch of the sun
I release my scent in praise of You
You know the source of this prayer,
recognizing my smile among thousands.

Me, infinitely small, reaching out
to the immeasurable You.

Full of longing I stretch, in the hope
to touch Your divine breath
You come and dance over the field
a fresh breeze brushing my face.
To celebrate the beauty of You
every single flower joins the dance.

In the morning each drop of dew
holds the miracle of You
sparkling in rainbow colors.
Embraced by Your Light
I weep tears of pure joy
my petals shiver in delight
in the sweet awareness
of belonging to You.

As brief as my life will be
forever it will be joined to Yours.
From dawn till dusk I’m open
to the tender touch of Your Love.
And when the night falls
in silent whispers I tell the stars
about the sweetness of the day,
the sweetness of my Life,
the sweetness of breathing You.

Me, infinitely small reaching out
to the immeasurable You.
Becoming One.


© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-05-04 04:11 PM


He surely does make us feel terribly small
when we see all of what He has given us.

Nicely done..

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-05-04 04:18 PM


As brief as my life will be
forever it will be joined to Yours.
From dawn till dusk I’m open
to the tender touch of Your Love.

Life is sweet, fullfilling and brief, but true love is measureless.  
Lucky for you Margherita~  This is very pretty.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-05-04 05:27 PM


Lovely...James
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-05-04 05:45 PM


Margherita - now how did you know that besides a red rose, this is one of my favorite colored flowers? Marvelous things He does...

BC

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-05-04 06:19 PM


Moving and filled with beauty...as always.
Love,
Eric

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-05-04 06:23 PM


"Me, infinitely small reaching out
to the immeasurable You.
Becoming One."

------------------------------------------
Incredibly beautiful....
Amazingly inspirational, and very much enjoyed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

MikeFessel
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7 posted 2003-05-05 05:39 AM


Margherita,
This is a breathtakingly beautiful piece. I could get lost in this beautiful, softly flowing, peaceful poem for ages. Oh how I would really like to right now. Thanks for the few moments of gorgeous peace I found in this!

    Mike

[This message has been edited by MikeFessel (05-05-2003 05:40 AM).]

junemac
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8 posted 2003-05-05 06:10 AM


wonderful !!!!!!! that is so very pretty.
x june x

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-05-05 06:29 AM


As brief as my life will be
forever it will be joined to Yours.
From dawn till dusk I’m open
to the tender touch of Your Love.
And when the night falls
in silent whispers I tell the stars
about the sweetness of the day,
the sweetness of my Life,
the sweetness of breathing You.
Me, infinitely small reaching out
to the immeasurable You.
Becoming One.



Margherita, this is just absolutlely beautiful. It
does have such a peaceful feel to it. He is the ultimate
"Peacegiver", isn't He? It's just when people are guilty
of not giving it all to Him that they are tormented.
I know. Pray for me that I will give everything of
my past to Him. Thank you for this, dear friend.
Hugs,  
Ethel




[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-05-2003 06:32 AM).]

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2003-05-05 06:47 AM


I'll be back...
Sunshine
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11 posted 2003-05-05 09:22 AM



I want to let you know that this is lovely, and inspirational...I'll be posting something soon...just because of you, and this...

NewEnglandlazurlu
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12 posted 2003-05-05 04:11 PM


WOW!!!

This is absolutely stunning and I love it.
You write such beautiful poems from your heart.

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-05-05 04:14 PM


Thank you for the sweetness of reading your poetry!

Love & Nature's Blessings,
Linda

MysticDreamer
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since 2003-04-21
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14 posted 2003-05-05 04:18 PM


An Incredibly Beautiful Poem! Reading it gives you Warmth and Joy.
Thanks for sharing this.
Good Will ALways,
Mystic Dreamer

Margherita
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Eternity
15 posted 2003-05-05 06:28 PM


Thank you all dear friends for your loving replies. You touched my heart.
This was the result of a meditation when I deeply connected with the Source of Love.

Love and hugs. Margherita

ps Dear Ethel, I hold you close to my heart. Do not torment yourself, put your head on God's shoulders and be in peace.

Mistletoe Angel
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16 posted 2003-05-06 08:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Margherita, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I always find smiles in the heart of nature and the lilacs and crabapple blossoms always make me feel rejuvenated with the bumblebees buzzing and the perfumes they bring! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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