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junemac
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0 posted 2003-04-25 02:54 PM



sharing


sadness in your heart,
touches me in mine,
pain so tender and raw,
with yours it will entwine.

let me know your sorrow,
that i might share with you,
help to heal your aching soul,
and we will see it through.

let my arms protect you,
caress away your tears,
dress your wounds with love,
nursing all your fears.


sew stitches round your agony,
so your heart won't tear apart,
stroking bruising from your ego,
where blows have made it smart.

crushed and broken down like this,
i surely cannot bear,
i need to make you whole again,
i beg you ....... let me share.


© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-25 03:30 PM


what a wonderful offer of unconditional love and caring

WELCOME to Passions!

junemac
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2 posted 2003-04-25 04:11 PM


thank you so much.
hugs from june x

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3 posted 2003-04-25 05:13 PM


junemac
A lovely write, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2003-04-25 06:19 PM


good piece
whiskey
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5 posted 2003-04-25 09:11 PM


Wondeful piece, Can feel the emotion within it. Enjoyed  

Julie

[This message has been edited by whiskey (04-25-2003 09:12 PM).]

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-04-26 12:14 PM


just beautiful! got my vote!
QjQ
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7 posted 2003-04-26 12:22 PM


very nice write and thoughts

"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2003-04-27 12:42 PM


I'm glad I didn't miss this~

The semtiment begs to be heard~

and you've written it so well.

junemac
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9 posted 2003-04-28 04:08 PM


thank you all for your kind words. i was pretty scared of posting on here as this is the first time i have used a forum like this.
you have all helped to make me feel so welcome, thanks.

x june x

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10 posted 2003-05-05 12:35 PM


It's in time of sadness and depression that one needs a true friend by his/her side. Your friend will be most fortunate to have you with him/her, June.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Margherita
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11 posted 2003-05-05 06:04 PM


You show such a compassionate heart in this very lovely poem.
May the caring and sharing be mutual.
Love and welcome!
Margherita

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