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aran
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0 posted 2003-05-18 09:15 PM


The American Flag

Blood streaks down the canvas
as the trumpeter plays a sad melody
to each starry eyed youth
standing each in their own place
yet strangely together;
assembled without identity.

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Georgia
1 posted 2003-05-19 02:19 PM


interesting piece. I think alot of differnt interpetaions can be taken from this
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-05-19 02:25 PM


profoundly interesting
a sense of unity
in spite of individuality....
or because the individuality is
viewed collectively?

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