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Open Poetry #26

Into life we seek

Shimlu
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 11

0 posted 2003-05-16 07:54 PM

So I look around the edge
Beyond is an unwordly aura
Obligated, I jump into the oblivion
Gently gliding...I know now
How to explain the universe to you,
Without words I enter your mind to tell more

We only need the food of the gods
Seeking the answers through there insight

For now sitting under the stars
Transforming into another piece of the puzzle

The aztec's language, cryptic..now readible
I sink into something thought lost

                     I Awake
                     Stare
                     Breath
The sandy horizon beckons me to become,
Something I surely am not
The sands clear omniously - sparkling now,
A new place emerges

Devotion and love cause many emotions,
Let yourself be free to seek
To follow paths untaken, normalcy, and publics eye
Will destroy the best of the human's life

            Only will seeking your own words
            Cause you to find true answers
            Let yourself be your own God

A2J
Junior Member

since 2002-11-22

Posts 43
South Africa

1 posted 2003-05-17 01:18 AM

enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-05-17 06:07 AM

interesting write, I enjoyed the read

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-05-17 07:12 AM

This is a very interesting piece - Explaining the unknown in common words is quite a task. You've taken on the challenge valiantly...

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