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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-05-16 12:44 PM


Mirage of Her


The miles between us with winding
roads crossing open plains and up
many mountains.

Has me in a trance until i feel the
warm breeze touch my face that
feels like your sweet breath.

I reminisce in my mind of loving
passions and see a mirage of you
as my eyes gaze longingly.

A drop of rain touches my face and
lips and i long to feel the wetness
of your lips.

I reach out to hold you with my arms
only to find them holding a mirage of
you.

Remembering that miles get shorter
as hearts get fonder i now can feel
you in my arms.


It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-17-2003 01:43 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-16 12:51 PM


Is it getting hot down there? You are seeing mirages and it's only May.
enjoyed the longing hopefulness

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-05-16 12:54 PM


Glenn:

this is lovely and I do know this feeling:
the "mirage"  . . .
xxoo

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