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Katy11803
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since 2003-05-08
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0 posted 2003-05-14 05:10 PM


Thinking about how your so right,
And about how you hold me oh so tight.
Thinking about your gentle kiss,
And I'm thinking about how your'e the only one I'll
ever miss.
Thinking about how you all day and all night,
Thinkin about our wonderful talks,
And wondering if your thinking of me too.
And thinking of our simple walks.
And how great it feels to be with you.
Thinking about how great you are to me,
And about how great in the future we will be.
Thinking about your wonderful smile,
And just thinking about you for a while.
And I'll continue thinking about you until your
ready for me,
Whnever your ready I'll be here until then.
From now until forever,
Forever until then.



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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-05-14 05:13 PM


*Whnever your ready I'll be here until then.
From now until forever,
Forever until then.


i really liked yuor closeing lines

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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