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Goldboat
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since 2003-02-17
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0 posted 2003-05-14 03:03 PM




The best time is early in the morning,
The birds are melodious singing,
Flowers are giving off sweet aromas,
Butterflies are elegant flying.
I arrive at the garden,
With the intention of reading,
It has always been my way--
To not be in the mood for sightseeing.


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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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1 posted 2003-05-14 04:44 PM


How could you waste such a glorious chance? Toss the book! I love the scene you painted here, I want to go into that garden.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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2 posted 2003-05-14 04:48 PM


very nice write!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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