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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-05-14 06:05 AM


In Tender Moments

Everything is so nice
and sweet when a man
and a woman first meet.
You whisper sweet
nothing's in her ear
and she whispers back the
words you want to hear.
You touch her cheek
and you stroke her hair.
In tender moments first
kisses will be shared.

JamesLeee
May14
2003

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-14 07:26 AM


good write!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

HopeS
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2 posted 2003-05-14 07:57 AM


tender and sweet
words lovingly expressed  

Hope

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3 posted 2003-05-15 11:47 PM




(sigh) I still long for that first expression and to make the girl of my dreams feel this special! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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4 posted 2003-05-16 11:42 AM


James, this is so beautiful and romantic and dreamy and...
How I long to experience such a tender moment with someone special...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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5 posted 2003-05-16 11:53 AM


Awww, yeeees!--but keeping the tender moments coming is lots of fun as well!

Soft as a willow swaying in a spring breeze...

Warm hugs,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-05-16 12:39 PM


JamesMichael~
This is simply LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-05-16 01:32 PM


You are right JamesM...

Those first moments are so very tender.

*s
M

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-05-16 01:34 PM


ahhh James - this is a nice feeling . . .
liked this write
xxoo

Suetang
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9 posted 2003-05-17 05:34 PM


I really loved this one James.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Patricia
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10 posted 2003-05-17 05:42 PM


James,
You are so right about this...those first moments when everything is fresh, new, and exciting.  Ahhh, darn, now you got me thinking about him again.  Just when I think I got him out of my mind, one of you guys go and write something that sets my thoughts back into motion.

This is definitely one of my favorites in the James' collection of romantic verses.

-Patricia

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11 posted 2003-05-17 05:44 PM


Very sweet. I liked it alot.

SG

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