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heaven's angel
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heaven's angel |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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reflected back from the cracked glass giving a glow of gold setting off a pair of eyes framed by the chains following me lips that start to move as if the puppet strings were making it out from them come my deepest secrets why must you do this to me classify me as i am indeed the crisis is almost over impefect on the coloration upon the ivory walls where you were left with a pair of sultry eyes *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Wow, this is powerful imagery, sweet friend, this had my head spinning as I think sometimes the light can be so turbulent and ripples ever so fast! (big hugggsssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Riley, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good write!!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Very powerful writing here...Well done... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
There's a lot here.... Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This spun me around so fast, I had to go back and read it again! Intriguing write!--and with lots of energy! Peace, Love, & Light, Earth Angel |
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