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0 posted 2003-05-07 06:36 PM



Robin ~ Tanka



With his beak so full
Papa waits for me to peek
His three chicks, hungry
Then I hurried, rushed away
Papa’s here to feed and play



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-07 06:43 PM


Karilea...where, oh where is the photo of the babies?  Did I miss something.  Birds are such good parents...love watching it at my house too.  
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2 posted 2003-05-07 09:25 PM


He's a good Daddy, that he is. hugs, Chris

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that perches in the soul....
                  
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3 posted 2003-05-07 09:28 PM


Lighthearted and so beautiful....I love nature and your writing fits it perfectly...A total joy to read...

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4 posted 2003-05-07 10:33 PM


Delightful write Karilea.
Spring in the step of your words.
TD

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5 posted 2003-05-07 10:49 PM


Karilea, birds are so fascinating to watch. Thank you for sharing this with me.
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6 posted 2003-05-07 10:54 PM


I love watching bird families too...
gosh, the time just flys by when you sit there amazed at their comings and goings.
Thanks for the update...the pic is beautiful!
~Smiles, Nancy~

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7 posted 2003-05-07 11:46 PM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I want to see the baby pictures too, yay for Papa being there for them all, this is a gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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***Shakira***

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8 posted 2003-05-08 03:03 AM


I like to watch them too, spring is so full of new life.....tanka very much

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what a beauty!
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10 posted 2003-05-08 08:17 AM


And thankful we are... Spring surely took its time this year... Nicely penned, Sunshiny one...
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11 posted 2003-05-08 08:22 AM


Karilea,
Lovely,

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12 posted 2003-05-08 08:24 AM


Thank you for the photo of a robin! I haven't seen one of these harbingers of spring as of yet! --and the poem was delightful!

Happy Spring!
Linda

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