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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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They came and took the human molded themselves in his likeness and set him free on the planet given to him from the Garden of Eve... could have thought that the Garden was.. was where he came from molded from masterplans worked out eons earlier set forth continuously planted onto fresh soils repeatedly harvested. And who would be a body snatcher to take this form as a common wrapper why bother with the trivial pursuit of latent men in quest of vacant loot.. why bother and take such forms... to measure up to universal norms?? they flew in saucers without cups had us weaned from when just pups like Romulus and Remus would drink of the same milk from a protective mother wove it's fabric of silk on this blue dot a planet surface was hot from an ape that had swung was where humanoid had begun then set free on the blue dot's surface his mind then filled with an independent purpose. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-06-2003 04:47 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful. Eric |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Came back to read a second time Martin. Enjoyed the way your mind wraps the shadows of creation...and opens the door to a broader view of what we ponder. TD |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And who's to say?... I really enjoyed this one ecrivan...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"then set free on the blue dot's surface his mind then filled with an independent purpose" I wish I was half as intelligent as you. You can write with such passion on any subject *s M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ecrivan! Where have you been? A haitus? So good to see you again... and this! I loved your play of words, where your thoughts took us, your readers... Well done, my friend!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Karilea, what working on some art, exhibited down the street.. Diamond, suppose this has hints of Spilberg's latest together with Cocoon and who knows what that I had already touched on |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Maureen, Your wish is my command..hehe...just change your topic, and let your hand do the rest...let the words come and they will I'm saying Passing Shadow Thank you. Nan Would be interesting to know how long Darwinism will survive  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-10-2003 09:46 PM).] |
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