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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-05-03 12:39 PM



Do you ever awaken to a morning sun
rise lighting up the dawn, and hear the
birds chirping to awaken each new day.

At twilight have you ever saw the glow
of sunset with it's kaleidoscope of
colors, and watched the birds winging
on to roost, and felt the evening breeze
against your face,have you ever touched
the rushing waters of a cool mountain
stream.

Have you ever experienced a moon beam
brightly flickering through the trees at night,
or seen a shooting star streaking across the
dark night sky, with twinkling stars winking
as it passes by.

Take my hand~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~end your solitude,
and let us walk this journey together, and see
these reflections of life, looking deep into each
others eyes, let us cherish these experiences
with love and bond forever come walk with me

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

© Copyright 2003 gMt - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-05-03 12:42 PM


glenn:

goodness this is amazing!

Take my hand~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~end your solitude,
and let us walk this journey together

amazing insight, my friend
this IS enlightening
xxoo

Mysteria
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2 posted 2003-05-03 01:55 PM


This was absolutely beautiful - saved it to read again in my spare time.  
Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2003-05-03 03:03 PM


QjQ...A very beautiful poem with startling imagery tht just seems to draw me into the poem. I love the ending especially:

Take my hand~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~end your solitude,
and let us walk this journey together, and see
these reflections of life, looking deep into each
others eyes, let us cherish these experiences
with love and bond forever come walk with me

This is extremely romantic and gentle. It reminds me of the old-fashioned ways of knightly courting. ***Ivy Rose


regards2you
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4 posted 2003-05-03 04:19 PM



QjQ,

It does have a special feel to it.

How wonderful to share all of life's most beautiful moments with another...

Romantic and soft,

Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

QjQ
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U.S.A.
5 posted 2003-05-03 04:57 PM


thanks for all you replys!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-05-05 11:43 AM


A very beautiful walk....
It's very romantic and dreamy!!!!
Enjoyed!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Magnus
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7 posted 2003-05-05 04:57 PM


Who could resist?  Surely no one...

Like the pen name,  very unique... QjQ..
like it!!

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