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Tangled in the Tides
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Tangled in the Tides |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Swimming beneath the sea underwater in your eyes where the ocean turns to blue as the current shifts and drifts tangled in the tides. Walking in your shadow through flecks and silver slivers zoom in, shudders click pass around a sundial cascading over waterfalls. A walk along the dark side veiled in the moonlight crescent shapes float through space landing in the stars to turn. Reset like a clock that ticks in time that passes on the spot seconds fall behind, and then in every frame, held still I'm there. ~*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Lori, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I have found myself get pulled into the undertow numerous times, of the umpteenth times of curiosity I deal with and wanting to makea bold journey to find out more of what it is to dive! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful excursion, sweet friend, this had me pondering, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow. I'm saving this one, yep.... into the library with it! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Oh I loved the part, "underwater in your eyes..." Beautiful, just beautiful. But then this whole piece SINGS to me simply because of it's subject.  Lovely read!~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Lori! Another for my library! ~TGIFriday Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now I'm there, and "Tangled in the Tides"! You certainly have a brilliant way of making your reader feel the depths of your emotions! Very well done, Dear Blue! Warm hugs, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah~ Thank you for always leaving a thoughtful reply for me. I'm glad you thought this worth saving, thank you so much Ed~ Seamaiden~ Thank you for liking what I wrote, but even more, for telling me so. Nancy~ TGIF, you know it! Thanks, you. Linda~ Sometimes I think I shouldn't venture out quite so far, but what the hey, I'm glad you could feel it! Hugs~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
WoW! This is good. One of your best. (Hmmm, each one it seems). Awesome Lori, in your growth... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Wow, Lori, had to read this beautiful poem twice. Tangled in the tides and time circles back to always you are there, for him....wonderful.... that is my take and you I know I rarely read poetry [right] grins.... It really is quite a stunning creation of yours. enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
seconds fall behind, and then in every frame, held still I'm there. Awesome Bluesygirl...love this!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...just under the words, so easty to see..these pieces of your heart reflecting. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hmmm, that was right nice of you. Thanks wranx~ Pat~ So sweet of you, time has it's way for sure. Thank you girl friend~ Hi Chris~ Nice to see you here, and thanks for reading. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Martie~ Thank you for your thoughts. They are truly heartfelt, and give me a warm and fuzzy feeling. I mean that sincerely~ hugs~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nice freeze frame bluesy . . . *wink* tweets xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I was just wondering about you. And here you are! Thanks, tweets~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I wish you could see my face when I read you... What talent rises off these pages when your thoughts are free to wave. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I know the feeling, it's probably similar to the look I get when reading you. And that's a good thing~ Thank you TD~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhhh sweet lady, you are so lovely.....as are these words.....  Lauren~ Through the darkness |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What a wonderful style you have... I can't wait to read more! Fantastic piece... Richy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lauren~ I am thankful for you and your never ending support and friendship. Hugs ya~ Hi Richy~ You flatter me, and I can dig that. Thanks a lot and *welcome* |
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