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kaile
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0 posted 2003-01-02 08:45 AM


Squashed together
with the rest of the nation,
we stared blankly
at reflections of skyscrapers
in Singapore River.

impatient glaring at our watches,
our foreheads futilely wiped

(still) the wait to count from 10 to 0

that accomplished,
our instinctive selves
urgently stormed
to the train station,

leaving litter behind



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ethome
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1 posted 2003-01-02 09:26 AM


Well there's fine for that here but not on that night....Cute write I enjoyed the image.
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2 posted 2003-01-02 10:39 AM


So it isn't just in America that the night ends and the new year begins on a note of rubbish?
Is this proof that we have no intentions of cleaning up our collective acts?
LOL though at the 'squashed' imagery and then the sudden mad dash for the train.

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3 posted 2003-01-02 10:47 AM


I like this, too. So people all over the world like fireworks?
I wonder if folks in lots of other places look at fireworks
on the Fourth Of July (or some other day of celebration during the year)?
                 

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-01-02 12:51 PM


thanks for sharing this
kaile
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5 posted 2003-01-02 09:22 PM


Eric, that's a fine for littering in my country too, up to SS1000 but apparently nobody cares enough...

Kacy, i'm afraid so...littering seems to be the rage here, despite a "Clean and Green Campaign"...thanks for your LOL...it's a cheap thrill i guess but nonetheless i'm glad someone else besides me liked this musing...

Ethel, well, Singaporeans get to watch fireworks on our National Day (9th Aug), eve of the Chinese New Year, New Year's Eve and some other dates, depending on the enormity of the occasion...

oh yes, fireworks-watching is one of my favourite past-times...how about you?

thanks passing shadows for stopping by and leaving a comment...

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6 posted 2003-01-03 09:52 AM


Seems a perfect description of the event, I always feel a bit let down after the hoots and well wishes for a new year, the hugs and bright hopes as well as thanksgiving for the year closing. I always think everywhere else, the celebration goes on longer and "we're" the only ones dispersing quickly from the pomp and revelry/reverie. It helps not being in the only group that rushes the closure of a new beginning.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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7 posted 2003-01-03 10:14 AM


I enjoyed First Nite Annapolis and all the events leading up to the fireworks..then we left  before the thousands of people did and missed the fireworks.
But I have seen them before. *s

M

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8 posted 2003-01-03 11:14 PM


Virginia, thanks for your thoughtful comment...while i had similar sentiments, i just felt the whole situation was absurd...as Obelix might comment, "these Singaporeans are crazy!"..but it comforts me to know that such behaviour is not exclusive..

Maureen, i admire you...i think it takes a lot of discipline to turn away from fireworks even though one may have seen them tonnes of times before and that their beauty is fleeting...i know that i can't do that...

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