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SPIRIT
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0 posted 2002-12-31 04:23 PM



THE GENTLE SON

I had a son,
A gentle son,
Who never struck another.
He was my boy,
My only boy,
I was a proud, proud mother.

They sent my son,
My gentle son,
Off to fight a war.
They killed my boy,
My gentle boy
Whom I shall see no more.

I had a son.
He's dead, my son,
And I can have no other.
He was my boy
My pride and joy,
And I am still
His proud, proud mother.


I wrote this for the Mothers ’of a Gentle Son’ during the Vietnam War.

© Copyright 2002 das - All Rights Reserved
cupcake
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1 posted 2003-01-05 10:40 AM


This one made me cry.  Well done!
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-05 10:51 AM


Spirit, this is a very true poem.....too true.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

LADY_DEATH
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3 posted 2003-01-05 10:55 AM


It was a sad poem, but also too true.War always has casualties... whether you are a soldier or the parents and family of a soldier.Someone always dies at the end.And that's sad!but the poem was terrific!


Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-01-05 11:14 AM



Dinah, thank you for the remembrance of the past.  This is a tribute to all fallen men, and women, who have served in our armed forces.  I do hope you bring it back to us in the future, for those days when we pay honor to them.  It is worthy of that type of read, again, and again, lest we forget.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-05 11:37 AM


SPIRIT
A beautiful poem. Thank you.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2003-01-05 11:38 AM


Please God let no more of our sons go off to be slaughtered ever again.

May peace reign in our world.

Hugs, Marti

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