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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-12-30 11:25 PM


Favorite Part

We still have a
long way to go
but this I
already know.
I love to
touch her back.
A back so close
to perfection
it gives me
an erection.
When I touch her back
it's as if we are one.
She in possession of
every sweet pound of flesh
and I given the priviledge
of her beauty to caress.
From the nape of her neck
to the end of her spine
I want her delicious back
to be mine all mine.
I wait until she tells me
to rub her back again.
I smile and I begin.

JamesLee
December30
2002

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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
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1 posted 2002-12-30 11:47 PM


do all of us girls like our acks rubbed? or is it a guy thing do they just enjoy doing it?

good write

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    Love Always
       Kellie

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-12-31 01:17 AM


lucky lady
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2002-12-31 06:49 AM


is that all you do with your erection, touch her back?
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-01-03 03:23 AM


Thank you Kelly, passing shadows and ink for the nice response...
I believe I like her back so much because she enjoys to have her back rubbed...her response encourages me...James

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2003-01-04 11:54 PM


This reads so smooth James~  

Very nice rub you wrote!!

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-01-05 12:02 PM


Now, James.............
This made me  REALLY  wish that Gary was here right now to give me a (back) rub.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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