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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2002-12-29 10:43 PM


With Regret

Don’t come any closer,
I can’t bear
To see my guilt,
Reflected,
In your eyes.
I never meant
To hurt you,
The treachery
Was of my making.
I can argue that
My inexplicable stupidity
Was brought forth from
My immaturity,
A flagrant lie.
I do regret my actions,
The deeds that
Damaged what we had,
Destroyed - who we were.
I created untold havoc,
Your trust in me
Became destitute,
Rightfully so.
Where was I in your need?
I let you down by removing
My wholehearted support
From you,
When you earnestly needed it
The most.
I should have been a haven
For your triumphs,
No matter how small.
Instead
I was a sacrilegious temple
For your addictions,
Feeding you
At the altar
Of enslavement.
Dependent
On your obsessions,
Your cravings,
To fill a void
In my own life.

© Copyright 2002 das - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-12-30 09:35 AM



Enabling others to harm themselves is such an easy trap to fall in to...I know.  A second Welcome to Passions, Spirit...I hope you enjoy your new found poet home...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-12-30 09:45 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS SPIRIT!
Oh how many of us know this feeling well.
Enjoyed reading your first post in Open.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

neveah5
Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197
Ohio
3 posted 2002-12-30 09:46 AM


Very painful experience. Nice write
RSWells
Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

4 posted 2002-12-30 09:50 AM


This ink, the color of blood drawn from deep runs down the page in guilt. Effective.
regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
5 posted 2002-12-30 10:09 AM



~Wow~!  Insigtful and heartfelt.
Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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