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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-12-21 09:48 PM


Outside a Church
on a cold winter's night
There's a Nativity Scene
underneath a bright light
In the cold, trying to tell
a wonderful story, you see
The true meaning of Christmas
it tells to you and me
Many years ago,
in the Bible we're told
God sent His Son
this earth to behold
He sent Him to Mary
to have as her son
She knew before He was born,
this babe was God's Chosen One
As Mary and Joseph on
this long journey went
She got very tired
carrying the One God had sent
So they tried to find
a room at the inn
No rooms were left, a night
in the hay, they'd spend
Born on that night,
was a little baby boy
His name was Jesus,
He brought them much joy
Wrapped in swaddling clothes,
was the little Christ child
And put in the manger
to rest for a while
God sent angels
to watch over Him
Keeping them safe,
was His plan for them
There came three wise men,
traveling from afar
To worship the Child born,
they were led by a star
This is the start,
as unfolds the story
Of a Saviour sent to earth,
from His place in Glory
The true meaning of Christmas,
seen on a cold winter's night
The blessed Nativity Scene,
under a bright light

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-21 09:53 PM


Ethel, I do believe this is one of your best.  Thank you for this!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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2 posted 2002-12-21 09:58 PM


Thank you, Michael. I really appreciate that.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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3 posted 2002-12-21 10:46 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is lovely, sweet friend, I remember this so much and cried reading it imagining the boy Jesus and the light shining upon Him! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all wish you the merriest Christmas, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-12-21 10:53 PM


Thank you, Noah. I love the Christmas Story so much. Your poem made me think of this one, so I decided to repost it.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2002-12-22 06:32 AM


Let us never forget the true meaning of Christmas
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6 posted 2002-12-22 07:59 AM



Thank you, Ethel.  As long as people continue to tell the story, the meaning should never be lost...

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7 posted 2002-12-22 08:02 AM


The most wondrous of all the stories of our culture, lovingly and craftily told. Well done.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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8 posted 2002-12-22 12:19 PM


Ethel I am glad that you reposted as I don't recall seeing this lovely write before.  Indeed, may we all remember the meaning of the season.
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9 posted 2002-12-22 12:27 PM


This is something we need to remember. Not just now, but every day.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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10 posted 2002-12-22 01:52 PM



the magic of the christmas story retold.
i enjoyed the read. i think you should
break the rhyming couplets into four line
stanzas though. with it being so
clumped, i almost got lost. still, flawless
rthythm and nice read.

-chris.

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11 posted 2002-12-22 05:30 PM


lovely read for the season--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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