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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-12-21 10:13 AM



Adjust those unique wings.
Fly to the highest tree.
You will soon see
that the sky has a way
of adjusting itself
to the spread of your wings.
So fly freely.
Don't worry
about the edges
of your world,
they are forever moving.


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Inspired by White Rose (Anne) /pip/Forum76/HTML/000365.html

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-21-2002 11:13 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-21 11:13 AM


Kacy, this is a fantastic, poetic response to her poem
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2 posted 2002-12-21 11:18 AM


Thanks. I hope she sees what the SEA sees.
LOL,  I couldn't resist that line.

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3 posted 2002-12-21 12:45 PM


nice
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4 posted 2002-12-21 01:32 PM


Kacy,  I believe she will...I do...

Nice Inspire..

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5 posted 2002-12-21 02:06 PM


This is a beautiful poem inspired by my/our friend Anne...she definately has wings, whether like a bird or an angel. Thanks for writing this for us to share. You've got a warm tender heart.

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6 posted 2002-12-21 02:10 PM


Thanks to each of you, for helping to give her a lift today.
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7 posted 2002-12-21 05:03 PM




(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, you always paint such gorgeous faith and visions in your words! (kiss on cheek) Always know you are a sparrow of God, sweet friend, believe you can fly, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-12-21 05:15 PM


When it is our wings we flex
We find a life without a hex
Even tho' it may perplex
can't wait to see what happens next

You've put down a very lovely thought.  Nicely written.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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9 posted 2002-12-21 05:52 PM


Kacy, this is just wonderful. How very sweet of you to write this, inspired by my poem. And it does indeed lift my spirits. Thank you
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10 posted 2002-12-21 06:29 PM


that the sky has a way
of adjusting itself
to the spread of your wings.

Damn, I like that!

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11 posted 2002-12-22 04:17 PM


Noah, Kayjay, Duncan, thanks for helping with the lift.
White Rose, happy to help, anytime. May your lift be high enough to carry you wherever you need to be.

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