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Bleeding Heart
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Bleeding Heart |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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This was written about a year ago.. Bleeding Heart I carried my bleeding heart to the altar I cried out for God to make it whole Thinking if anyone could fix it God would surely know I waited and waited for the pain to cease I prayed and cried for help I wanted for my sorrow, some kind of release In my face the pain was easy to see The anguish and complete destruction For this reason, surely he would help me So I continued to cradle my bleeding heart Still waiting for the simple fix Somehow knowing, until I can repair it on my own There can never be painlessness |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ There is a soft poignancy to this piece~ Thanks so much for sharing it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Susan - I hope that things did get better since you've written this... BC |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Susan, About as deep is as gets! I hope your enjoying pains flowering bloom: perseverance, character and faith! ...that is, if you don't mind a few lumps along the way  Rf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect expression! I know it well! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very sad I feel the pain reaching through these lines and it grabs you and wont let go. very well done (but would I expect less?) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you. I missed you this morning. Where oh where have you been My poetic friend? Susan |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Working..unfortunately have to do once in awhile |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
now don't and slip down there before you get read |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes I know these feelings very well. Good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ohhhhhh you said the "W" word. Yikes, you cursed me, I have been inundated with work problems today. The base is at Beta. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
sorry need a virtual backrub? [This message has been edited by Brad Majors (02-12-2003 02:13 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
That would be great. Right now I am on the phone, typing this and looking at a report. Geez, how about Tahiti? Susan |
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