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DarkShroud
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0 posted 2003-01-14 03:59 PM


Brightest Star

I've watched the stars in the night.
Just to see your face,
you make me glow more than anything.
You are the brightest star in the night.
When I see you, you make me glow so bright.
You are the brightest and best thing
that has ever happened to me.
There are so many stars in the night,
but only one of you,
and I will always love you and only you. . . .

Avayon M. Thorp

[This message has been edited by DarkShroud (01-14-2003 04:29 PM).]

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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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1 posted 2003-01-14 04:05 PM


Very sweet, enjoyed reading this.

romantic

DarkShroud
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2 posted 2003-01-14 04:26 PM


I'm Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks
DS




May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

[This message has been edited by DarkShroud (01-14-2003 04:28 PM).]

enchantingvamp
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3 posted 2003-01-14 05:10 PM


This was too cute.....enjoyed.
It also reminded me of that company that you can contact and have a star named after you.

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-14 06:07 PM


This is pretty. I enjoy love poems about the stars.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-01-14 11:57 PM




(sigh) This is a precious love poem, sweet friend, I always cry imagining the stars in my dream loves eyes, I wish for Andromeda to always fill your sweethearts smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Avayon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-01-15 02:22 AM


yes, very romantic
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