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meningitis
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since 2003-01-10
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planet called earth

0 posted 2003-01-13 05:24 AM


you have opened my vein
but there's no more blood
you have sucked me dry
left me with only
half remembered love
my mouth works vigorously
yet no sound escapes me
the past becomes naught
but clouded fantasy

© Copyright 2003 jimbob - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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Posts 7704

1 posted 2003-01-13 05:36 AM


My true feelings? First thoughts: my god, I can identify with this...the thought of loving another person romantically is absolutely exhausting no? Sucked dry indeed...

sigh...

welcome to passions btw...nice to have you here..

K


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-01-13 07:06 AM



Welcome to Passions.  Please,
check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-01-13 08:51 AM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Jimbob, this is a sad but well-written debut, sweet friend, I wish for these vampires to be chased away from you and for true love to find its way back to you, this is powerful, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet JimBob, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet JimBob, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-13-2003 08:52 AM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-01-13 09:15 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I shall look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2003-01-13 09:16 AM


meningitis
Touche, enjoyed.

Nightshade
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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
6 posted 2003-01-13 09:20 AM




        
    
    Enjoyed your first post!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-01-13 09:41 AM


WELCOME TO  PASSIONS

I enjoyed your first post and hope to read more of you.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Magnus
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8 posted 2003-01-13 07:09 PM


Thanx for sharing this.  I think we have all
felt similar feelings,  not a lot of fun.

Welcome to Passions..

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
9 posted 2003-01-13 07:13 PM


An interesting read with an interesting name.  May you some day find a willing donor.  Thanks for sharing and welcome to PIP.
passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-01-14 02:22 AM


whew! good write very expressive and i can relate. Welcome to Passions!
enchantingvamp
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since 2002-12-21
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Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!
11 posted 2003-01-14 05:07 AM


Welcome to Passions!
I very much enjoyed this 1st post, hoping many more follow.

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

winston
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since 2002-12-19
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NW of Eden
12 posted 2003-01-14 12:22 PM


Welcome to Big Brother's place meningitis! Hope there is more of where this piece came from?

"am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak

[This message has been edited by winston (01-14-2003 12:24 PM).]

Midnitesun
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Gaia
13 posted 2003-01-14 01:52 PM


What blood type are you?
Welcome to Passions. Nice bytes.

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
14 posted 2003-01-14 02:24 PM


An intriguing write.... either you are breathless enjoying or you are withering away.  either way, the description is vivid.


Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

ecrivan
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my own state
15 posted 2003-01-15 01:11 AM


welcome...enjoyed the read


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