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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
And So It Goes The world was spinning Wild was the wind and the snow came And she waited and she watched Dark was the night Stars exploding into the black And she counted hoping to catch a wish When the sun came It blew to the earth wisps of warmth She wrapped her arms around herself breathing in peace of mind The morning was slient as squirrels skipped over the frozen ground And she waited and she watched.. c2003SimplyGold |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, very beautiful. The mood is so peaceful...almost as though a fresh snow had fallen upon a new morn...outside beyond the window... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how beautiful this is! So good to see you here. You have been missed! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is quite lovely. I really enjoyed it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice, unique style , liked this a lot |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Electra, I am so glad you're back, sweet friend, I have missed you so much as this turbulent piece enthralled me hoping I can catch a star and make my dreas come true in the maelstrom I am in! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I do like this!! Nice to read your words once again. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
SimplyGold~ A lovely tranquil poem.I could feel myself sitting in front of a fire place, watching squirrels through the window.Thanks for sharing...Paul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. I am glad to see you back. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very peaceful write, love the squirrel part |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I sit here watching my hungry little squirrel invading my birdfeeder... Picturing Lyra doing the same at her window... Lovely words, Electra...  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you all so much for the wonderful replies. How I have missed the reads and the writes. It is good to be back again for the moment, life can get pretty hectic. Coming here is a breath of fresh air and I so appreicate reading your work as it inspires me to carry on. Your expressed warmth and support leaves me in good spirits. SimplyGold |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
SG, this is beautiful. Don't know how I misseed it yesterday. BTW, it's good to see your words again. I really enjoy reading them....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this does convey a sense of peace and a feeling of all being right in the world, if only for that moment, very beautifully done |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
SG, Yes, peace of mind. Thank you for sharing this tranquil poem. It is special. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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