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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-01-04 11:00 AM



All alone with thoughts
softness caressing, love
unconditional

Pause on arm, touches
gentleness, knowing caring
eyes to eyes sharing

Soft breathing, purring
closing out the light of day
dreams to come, what may




"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-04-2003 11:07 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-01-04 11:12 AM


How softly this one purrs!
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-01-04 11:14 AM


Always enjoy the tenderness in your writes.
Very pleasing to the ear. ThisDiamond

regards2you
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3 posted 2003-01-04 11:34 AM




~M~

Spun, and as sweet as cotton candy.


Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-01-04 12:06 PM


Maureen,
Your getting better all the time.

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-01-04 01:24 PM


nakdthoughts- may your dreams come true...

BC

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-01-04 01:40 PM


Thank you all..this was about my cat  Sugar..she likes to lay with me and place her paws(pause) across my arm and look into my eyes...and of course with her it is an unconditional love
M

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-01-04 02:25 PM


ooooooh. i love this. in to my library it goes. arent cats the best for a bit of snuggling? a lovely warm tribute to a womans best friend.
lots of love, gemma xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-01-04 02:27 PM


So gentle...so lovely.
Much enjoyed Maureen.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-01-04 02:33 PM


I love cats! and your beautiful writing!
nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-01-04 05:59 PM


gemjop
I do believe a cat is a woman's best friend *s...at least she keeps me company and rewards me now and then with her touch.

M

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