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Shereen
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since 2004-01-05
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0 posted 2004-01-08 11:45 AM


-A Message-


The clouds are rolling in again,
The time has come for us my friend
To take shelter in decision’s palm
And wait there for the bliss of calm

The waters flow as thick as blood
Threatening to bring the flood
Of damnation over man
And strike us down right where we stand

There is hope for very few…
Those who’ve made old promise new
Take the hand of He who is Love
And fly to Grace like winged dove

Storms will rage and ravage time
Turning cold hearts to sublime
Sparking forth righteousness
To those who hold dear hatefulness

Free will to us, He has given
To make the choice not to sin
But choices come to us daylong
It is for us to decipher right from wrong.

In our hearts, we know the course
Our lives should take without remorse
But conformity to “man’s” ideals
Will forever seal the deal

Search your heart, mind, soul and body
For the Devil’s craftsmanship is shoddy
Find those things now in your life
That cause you pain, resentment and strife

Cast them to the winds of change
It’s time you start to rearrange
Remember who has given you breath
And who will judge you at your death.


© Copyright 2004 Shereen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-08 01:41 PM


A very strong message in this well done poem, and I loved some of the lines in it very, very much.  Nicely done.


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2 posted 2004-01-09 02:09 AM


Well done message, Shereen.  I am glad you have found this corner too.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2004-01-10 03:12 PM


Shereen:  I replied to this but for some reason my response doesn't show up, so trying again.

Excellent poem and I enjoyed the message!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2004-01-28 11:39 PM




(big angel hugs) He will indeed govern us every step of the way and so may we seek penitence for how we have sinned and work to come clean so we can enter above as sheep with most white coats! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most beautiful message, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shereen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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