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san
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since 2003-08-24
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0 posted 2003-08-24 04:06 PM


I could change the future,
If I could see the future
I could alter it my way,
Start from scratch like a brand new day

Could make this world an Elysium
& Stretch out tranquillity to millennium
Could glow the dark realities of life
& Shape fate using my mental knife

Is there any channel that gets this done?
Often my conscience questions me!
And it gives me no answer but one-
Give your faith to it and you will see

Future, a word so complicated, so complex
It tells you nothing about itself
Only Almighty knows what is next
& He has hidden it for a safer context

Now I wish this wish grants not
For man can only behold the pleasures
What would we do if we had to visualise pains?
What I wish now is that, it for all ends up in leisure.

© Copyright 2003 san - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-08-24 04:13 PM


Welcome to Passions!

I enjoyed this wistful, wishful post, and look forward to reading more from you.

Check your e mail for a special greetingQ

Mysteria
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2 posted 2003-08-25 03:46 AM


Welcome and it is so nice to see new folks joining in the Spiritual forum.  I hope you are really going to like this site, it is truly the best on the net.  You made quite a first impression and I shall be looking for more of your work.  Again, welcome.

Sure, I wear rose-colored glasses, makes everything just rosey. Carpe' Diem        

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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2003-08-25 01:25 PM


This is an interesting poem and idea. Hope that you will enjoy this site. There are many fine writers who post here and your work will be welcomed.

Betty Lou Hebert

Brigid WillowKeeper
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4 posted 2003-08-25 02:46 PM


Great job on capturing the essence of what everyone wishes! I have always seen time to be one big, BIG loop. You?
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5 posted 2003-08-30 10:00 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I can understand the desire of knowing what the future brings, though if we trust in Him, then truly we feel much more comfort, yay! (sigh) This is a wonderful debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, dearest San, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your heartfelt poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet San, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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