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Xelorz
Junior Member
since 2003-08-16
Posts 10
Burlington, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-16 11:55 PM


She let forth a cry
a life breeding plea
so confused
so distraught
unbestown of her fate
unaware of her path

to be left destitute
by the everlasting leach
drained of essence
and left a barren fool

to endure the unbroken dispute
of infallible desolation
trudging through time
suppressed from significance

a naive ashen dove
abound with chasity
to be exploited
then left a cursed shard

such a young feeble mind
upon an unblemished body
shall they grace more?
may she know joy?

only one can shield the burden
and place her upon the rock
only one who may redeem her
and remove the unhallowed noose

the divine liberator
the everlasting savior
my true lord
Jesus Christ


This is my first poem posted here. Hopefully it leaves a good impression.

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since 2001-03-07
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1 posted 2003-08-17 03:31 AM




Welcome to the site and I know you are really going to enjoy the friendships made here.  This was an excellent first posting and I am sure we all will enjoy numerous poems of yours in the future.

Check your email for a pleasant surprise, of just one of the things you can do here at Passions.  Again, welcome.

I don't want to know where I am going, it'll ruin my journey.
Carpe' Diem        

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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2 posted 2003-08-17 07:02 AM


He is the one that delivers! Thanks for sharing this one. Loved it!
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-08-17 01:18 PM


A wonderfully inspirational entrance post!
Welcome to Passions..I'm sure you will love it here.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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Idaho, USA
4 posted 2003-08-17 01:29 PM


Very moving poem!  Welcome to the site and I hope it will become your favorite place on the Web!

Betty Lou Hebert

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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2003-08-30 10:05 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, this is such a beautiful debut as He cares for all His sons and daughters and the dove shall fly again as broken wings will always mend in time! (sigh) I love it, may your heart always soar with harmony! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your uplifting poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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