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neweyeday
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since 2001-07-12
Posts 19


0 posted 2003-08-11 11:44 AM



when I read your words Lord
when I recite them back to you
does it make you smile
does it please you in some way

when I read I don't look away
or I will lose my place
and you are so quiet
I only hear myself talking

do you listen then
because you enjoy my reading
or only to cause me to hear
what you said read out loud

do you sit beside me Lord
with your arm around me
because I need it
or because you enjoy me

is it possible then
that you could love me
and spend time with me
just because you want to Lord?

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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-08-11 06:02 PM


This is so sweet. He's tickled I think! So cute.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-08-11 08:21 PM


Oh, I do believe He is smiling at you!
Well done and much enjoyed.
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

DawnG
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3 posted 2003-08-12 12:28 PM


I do not venture into Spritual often, but am glad I did tonight. This poem affected me very deeply and reminded me that I will always have a friend in the Lord.  Thank you.

                               Dawn

GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-08-15 08:30 PM


I never thought of it like this. But now that I have, I'm glad. Thank you ...I like this alot

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-09-17 04:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I know deep down with all my heart you have brought a big smile to His face with this gorgeous poem, sweet friend, He will always be there for you and wants to be there for you because He just wants to and loves you very much! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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