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X Q poet
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 47

0 posted 2003-05-31 12:51 PM

Will you be the hero, these troubled times require?
Will you pledge alleigence to the High King and Sire?
Receive the heroes welcome, and share the heroes lot
Quench your fear, timidity, and let it guide you not
Then wear the shining armour, that has been made for you
Fulfill all your potential for the heroes are so few
Let your courage gather, accumulate your strength
And may your valour increase, so you can stay the length
Of service that you promised, in your solemn pledge
To claim the heroes rightful place, living on the edge

Dedicated to Trinity

So guys, what do you think?

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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-05-31 01:31 PM

Andreas~
The melodic flow in this piece is absolutely stunning~
BEAUTIFULLY penned~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

LayItDown
Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 94

2 posted 2003-05-31 03:41 PM

A challenging poem that reads well.
I like it. I like it.
Makes the reader want to step up to the plate!

Love,
LayItDown

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-05-31 07:01 PM

Well done, the last line seems to Bring the poem all together. enjoyed.

mysticpoe

X Q poet
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 47

4 posted 2003-06-01 08:29 AM

Thanks guys...

Is there anything you would change in it?

And I've got a question... How has some of you got several tens of thousands of posts?

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X Q poet
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 47

5 posted 2003-06-01 08:31 AM

Please also notice that the word "increase" near the end is supposed to have the stress on the first syllable...

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-06-01 06:12 PM

(sigh) God Bless You, dearest Andreas, I truly believe that many of us take for granted the fact that we forget about the solemn pledge we make and just asking Him and praying is all we need to truly honor Him and show Him our support! (big huggggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andreas, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

X Q poet
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 47

7 posted 2003-06-03 04:06 PM

Hi, Thanks...

Yeah, Noah, you are one of those... More than 20000 posts... Is that really possible??

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